Tuesday, January 24, 2012

LOVE VS ANGER



Love is a deep red
It sounds like laughter and happiness
It tastes like chocolate--so sweet on your tongue
It smells like cookies fresh out of the oven
Love feels like warmth surrounding your heart

Anger is like a fiery red
It sounds like the breaking of a heart
It tastes like hard tack--repulsive and sugarless
It smells like cigarette smoke--killing you slowly
Anger feels like you are drowning in your own tears

2 comments:

  1. I love it! You have nice phrases that draw a picture in my mind and draws me in to read more. I love your contrast, Love and Anger couldn't be more opposite. Nice Job!

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  2. Good poem! You have great symbolism and do a great job of creating mental pictures!

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